beta
plot doesn't make sense but i need some mpreg. please.
honestly this kinda sucks. like sure. it's cute that he became the bottom when the original character of the story was supposed to be the top, but like their whole dynamic is just the other guy being obsessive and jealous over the mc and the mc being oblivious about literally everything. it's so annoying and frustrating.
um. ok. it's trash but i am actually quite surprised at how the mc doesn't just take everyone's bullshit. even when he should. i am curious to see where they take it?
dunno, man. so far it feels like a carbon copy of literally any college BL. Maybe later it will improve but for now i would say it's meh
this was kinda interesting in the sense that the mc is very much a slutty bottom and that it seems to be building up to a harem. I would like to see how it ends
i mean... it was cute but like i don't really care for their dynamic and i think the plot has some flow issues? i don't know how to describe it. Like there is no time for moments to have any impact it's just rushing from one thing to the next and it's all not particularly building out a character arc for anyone.
Please dear god, no more updates, i can't take it
Codename March