I commend the FL's ferocity so to speak, but the story is jumping too fast, yet not enough. Character development has the barest bullet points before leaping towards the finish line of the cliche "FL-on-top". It had potential, but the emotional development wasn't done well, and panders to the consumable preferences of isekai-bingers. It could've been good, it could've been better. It's just disappointing
I don't remember why, but it was tiring
First 30 chapters, then go on your merry way. Our interesting independent FL becomes a mess of cliches and damselling and ML just isn't in the story most of the time
Art is good. The artist is skilled at drawing, but not storyboarding & plot development. The plot and writing ruin the story. The story wasn't structured well enough and I just feel bad for her
It was sort of interesting at the start, but I'm tired of iffy executions of tropes. Do it well and it's fantastic. Do it meh and it's worse than meh. I've tried multiple times to read it because I liked the original premise and the grandfather character, but it's just not interesting. Translation is not great. Personally, don't waste your time
Cliche's are normal. The premise could've been interesting. But the execution and storytelling fell flat and just reduced it to a bland revenge porn story. Too much effort into art, not enough into literally everything else
Art is good. But storyline and plot execution is not. The choice of core topic is not a very expansive one. It is possible to make it expansive. But the execution seems limited on the topic and the level of definition used. Speed is too fast too, more build up necessary. Noticing a unique thing abt someone is normal, but to hinge the whole storyline on that? With the execution so far? Nah
Typical modern trope. Tried to be edgy and shit, but sped too far off the cliff into speeding past any natural and slower character development and changing of the ppl around him. Dude has some issue with some saviour complex bullshit. Highlighting the MC's "good points" by making the "villains" crap and terrible ppl is fine, but doing it this shittily is just boring. At least add nuance and make it proper danger, not "one chop one slap hooray for the MC"
Was fun at the start, when there was some character development (sort of). Setting him to become a Midas' touch character; alright, he's super skilled. But the "saint" role, I'm not a fan of. At the end, it got really hard to read. Like substituting different sad stories to make the MC a "saint/hero". It's an old trick, but it's tired now. Basis of the story is fine and quite interesting in some ways, but read S1 and stop
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