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This is basically a mutilated version of a detailed novel plot, that's incredibly obvious. But as soon as they throw the random supernatural/fantasy stuff at you, it just becomes more weird, more lackluster and badly planned. It's just a mess.
They cut so much info out that was important that it's honestly not pleasant to read. Which is the one thing people shouldn't do if they want to adapt a novel or such into a comic. You have to have a sense of what is needed to give as info and what can be
If it wasn't for the toddler-personality of the MC, this story would be great.
Lost me within 1 chapter.
These kinda comics become the norm lately, that's sad.
The setup could have been really interesting but going for the good old fashioned and lazy route of:
- creep approaches
- creep molests MC
- MC says it's disgusting but he randomly gets a hard on like a hentai bitch
- they probably proceed to fuck because of the blackmail
You lost me with that shitty plot route. This has been done a hundred or a thousand times. Predictable, not likable and for anyone not reading t
I was really hyped to not only see a bearded ML but also one that wasn't a jackass or had rape-y tendecies.
Then chapter 7 rolled in and that went out the window. Felt honestly like someone entirely different wrote that chapter, since it didn't align with his precious behavior at all.
Not my thing, lost all interest honestly. But maybe someone else can have a blast with it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Paper Flower