beta
good representation of mental health issues like depression and maladaptive daydreaming, but it was frustrating watching them hurt each other constantly and so realistically. like eating vegetables, good for the tummy, but not my heart
3/10 lots of angst but no satisfaction
two dudes just hurting each other over and over again, one hung up on the past trying to get the other to remember
3/10 agonizing read bc all they do is just abuse each other, it’s sick, call it poetic or whatever but they’re good together since they’re both insane
Dude did some irredeemable shit to bottom, gets angry at everything, bottom leaves, top grows feelings, tries and fails at redeeming
Bottom gets stabbed, top cries and begs on knees, bottom accepts apology
1/10 bottom needs to find someone better, and top needs anger management classes
idek what to write for this one, top needs therapy and bottom needs a hug or the other way around
2/10
bro… if you want all angst, this is it, but top is clearly selfish and doesn’t actually care about bottom
so sad seeing the bottom give up
-1000/10
yeah locking him up should make him love you, tops like that pmo
The World Without You