beta
its just.. sigh. i really didn't like it. the only good thing is the cover
this was so fucking bad. the author was just miserably trying to romanticise slavery. vampire is just an excuse I HATE YOU WITH MY GUTS
i fucking HATE this. Like each chapter is just so, so, forced and painful.. i can sit through anything but this is just..
king of "i was horny im sorry for raping you "
the fact that I'm on this website is proof enough that I've read my fair share of pwp, THIS IS SHIT. THE CONFESSION AT THE END WAS SO. FUCKING. FORCED. THIS WAS THE MOST EMOTIONLESS, UNENJOYABLE (for both me and the uke) SHIT I'VE EVER READ. RAPE OMEGAVERSE IS STILL SO FUCKING BADDDD
i feel like the author just wanted to write some smut but was forced to make it habe feelings by their editor hence the last ch
it was SO BLAND.
The only striking thing was the bdsm and pretty artstyle.
Take this relationship as a reason for why trust issues exist, why communication is important, why PROPER CONFORMATION OF STUFF is necessary AND BASELESS ASSUMPTIONS are fucking bad
i fucking hate the seme. uke deserved so much better. for all that pain and pining, he says an apology and thats it? FUCK NAHHH REVENGE 😴😴😴
SUPER fast pacing. I get that all three were childhood friends, but imagine seeing the love of your life thirsting after the other friend because you two are not meant to be despite your love for eachother mf i would kill
honestly, i had been waiting for a translation of this for so long I didn't even care that it was bad but THE STORY IS SO ASS DUDE. SO THE BLOND IS JUST SUPPOSED TO MOVE ON?? THE RABBITS FEROCIOUSNESS IS GONE AFTER GETTING FUCKED TWICE??? HE FELL IN LOVE IN 2 DAYS??? THE TRAITOR WAS THAT MF???
this is so SO badly planned and its obvious the author js wanted to write smut with the BARE MINIMUM story. Art was good, but god FUCK everything else ruined it. I would rate this in negative but that's n
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