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Got tired of reading it in the middle. I slowly lost interest and eventually didn't care anymore how it'll end.
I'll probably still get back to this. My main problem with this is also my problem in many mafia/corporate titles-- I can't just bring myself to be interested in the many dragging situations which support the mafia/corporate atmosphere.
Stopped at Chapter 30. I know that there is some budding character development happening in there but it doesn't cover the fact that the story is kinda bland and generic.
Stopped at Ch 10
Stopped at Ch 13. I really want to like this. Come on, mystery mpreg and serial killers? What's not to like? However, something's really off with the flow of the story. The crown prince is childish too and has too much time on his hands.
Also, it's probably a dead giveaway that MC will be victimised by the serial killer who is probably the duke. I guess this story has more mystery potential when it was a novel where you can choose not to reveal a character's appearance.
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