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Og ml's reason for liking the sister seems valid, they ain't good people but i don't see a revenge necessary.
Childish, story all over the place, plotlines going nowhere, literally no one has a personality (only fl the first two chapters and then she completely loses it), rivals plotline forgotten, ptsd of him killing her forgotten, fl is straight up dumb, and not to even Talk about the 2nd ml, never have I ever seen someone so poorly written. Art is decent. (3/10). Also no time to let the emotions be felt. No plot (And fl plan made literally 0 sense) Potential story thats why it's sad.
The Reason Why Raeliana Ended up at the Duke's Mansion