beta
the idea is good but the fem mc went from being badass to giving literally absolutely nothing. i stuck through far too many chapters with this one
author took every mafia/boss x y/n wattpad fic that exists and mashed them together, but forgot to add the good part. idk if homeboy ever gets his revenge but atp wrap it up
a twelve year old wrote this. its not even so bad its funny. It’s just bad.
No.
this would have been on my fave bl list if it had the balls to actually make a statement. instead, the antagonists face literally no repercussions for their actions, and there’s zero catharsis whatsoever beside the fact that oh boy they get together ! fuck off . And fuck his twin brother too
a bad ending CAN ruin a good story. everything after the timeskip is straight up nonsense
someone needs to ban all mafia concepts from these authors with consequence of penitentiary
this one goes right at the top! oh boy i can’t even review rn im so disgusted!!!
all I can remember is he gets passed around and disrespected. no thanks
Legs That Won't Walk