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Plot holes galore. Might’ve been axed
Honestly it’s a bit of a hot mess. It has a good premise but the villains are all cartoon villain-ish and clearly villains for villainy’s sake. It feels like the writing or adaptation of someone who doesn’t quite know how to write characters. Logic also kinda takes a flying leap. It’s a pity coz mc herself was written fine sometimes but just overall handling of her was inconsistent
It’s got the typical jp manga flavour cliche plot pacing dunno how to explain
I don’t like the pacing because unfortunately it’s only one story per chapter. And I didn’t find anything particularly compelling so far
The art is fine. But the plot….? Wth is with that lame ass ending. And by that I mean the plot with his mom.
I Became a Villain Daughter