beta
note: ch 5 is a different story
surprisingly adorable! dialogues are natural-sounding and the plot moved smoothly, except for the chapter with the molester which i personally find to have a clunky execution. art was also excellent, emphasis on the effective character designs since they were really distinct and unique to each character.
was somewhat puzzled by the side characters' interactions because i thought it was gonna develop towards #that direction (like c'mon, full-on blushing and it me
so lovely, vivid, and nostalgic. feels like it exists between the boundary of dreams and reality. like a childhood memory you go to for comfort. or when the world is swathed by the hues of blue hour. or listening to the songs "Duvet" or "Show Me How". it drowns you in a very sad, sickening feeling but brings you peace and calm all the same.
my tear ducts tremble in fear whenever they see this author
super cute! xD
maybe one or two things could be improved, but all in all i think it's pretty good
...well i liked it and i think they have plenty of chemistry!
want to see more of the couple from the oneshot...
i'm not exactly surprised at the fact that what it took for me to not hate promiscuous MCs and/or MLs is simply just good writing.
although this one aimed beyond "good" and arrived at "phenomenal".
what the hell. are you sure these are only 2D characters and not real humans having conversations on my screen? there is so much life and depth and complexity to these characters BRO how do you that? how'd you write that? whatttt
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