beta
Overall story was very confusing, and the writing could use some work. The characters are very naive, and it created an unpleasant reading experience. I ended up dropping it after the first few chapters.
In this story, many plot holes are present, creating a confusing read. Everything went by so quickly, making it almost impossible for me to not reread certain parts just to try and understand a few scenes. Another reason I didn't like this is because of the unnecessary rape and sexual assault in practically every smut scene. It created an uncomfortable feeling, often making me skip over those parts. Overall, my opinion is that this story could definitely use some work and editing.
Main reason for my low review score is the fact that the mc and ml are brothers. Although they may not be related by blood, it is still odd to be in a romantic relationship with one another, when they are seen as legal family. This is personally just my opinion, so feel free to read this if you view the relationship as okay.
Was somewhat okay until rape took place in the story. The writing also has some patches and plot holes, which played another factor in my low review.
The amount of unnecessary sexual assault done to the main character is absolutely disgusting. It’s not written well and is always just pushed aside. When the main love interest raped him not once, not twice, not thrice, but four times, he was forgiven after saying he lost his job by saving the main character’s sister. The characters are written horribly, and their personalities are all over the place. Characters are randomly having a change in personality, making the story absolutely
This shit was so buns.
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