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Forgot about some of it but it was cute I think
I LIKE BIG BUTTS AND I CANNOT LIE!! YOU OTHER BROTHERS CANT DENY!!
Ending was rushed lots of plot missing they dismissed whatever happened in the past and Idk it ended up feeling bleh but the story had great potential I like the work they do and the start was great but seme was a bit too rude at times
Had potential cute dynamic and a bunch of animals but as it progressed it just became bland and stuff was added when they were unnecessary also there's a lot of stuff we don't know like the bullying and the fact that at the start he was described as a gloomy scary kid but all of a sudden they say he was fine in high school or college wtv but got bullied for some reason which are defo not about him being creepy / gloomy
Goodnight, Cinderella