1.2 dont bother

ch 13 she went to another man house at dead night. suddenly crying begging him not to leave her side then fainting. at morning she begged him to stay at her side while she taking a bath. she would just cry cry confused cry. like what are u doing girl

ch 14. she act like a child, which no problem since i assume she has been abused to that point but i lost it at how ML also treated her like a child. he bathes her, feeds her, let her play with his papers. MC can talk but she refuses. she just groans, i thought she secretly smart and calculative but her thinking is also like a child, assuming thats cause of the abuse but i cant stand it. its like watching a grown man marrying a child. if thats what ur into then yea this for u

ml weird looking. smth smth wattpad ish

sloppery slop

ch. 4. weird characterization. ml is adopted as little brother. boringgg

65/91 dragging out. academy arc with short skirt