beta
It’s… Okay. With all the different stories I’m sure you’ll find one you enjoy but most of them felt rather boring to me. I understand that these are a collection of multiple short stories but I still feel like it could’ve been improved on.
Overall most the stories felt lackluster to me and I had problems seeing any real chemistry between any of the pairings.
I feel like the plot is a bit strange? The reasons behind most of the main conflicts don’t make any sense! I felt my brain fry just trying to understand, I feel like it would’ve made more sense if the MC was a bastard child. Also the love triangle(square?) felt lackluster, it would’ve been more interesting if the original ML had fallen for the ML like in the original in universe story instead of MC.
Did however enjoy the main pair’s relationship.
Kiss the Abyss