beta
chasing arc is so frustrating & the seme honestly isn't that bad. there's this marianna trench sized logic gap in how the uke's feelings towards the seme barely budged despite the seme treating him well, consistently, out of nowhere. & honestly the later chapters have me just feeling like the uke should leave because he's too dense to be honest with himself after the seme almost died for him three times like ok bro if udw ur happiness its whatever
*spoilers for ending*
ok this is pretty good for 80% and its some beautiful twin semes+uke action, but the author had no idea what to do with the younger twin after the uke chose the older one... the younger twin's possessiveness and the attachment between them just disappeared like that, like you can't make me believe that either of them would give up on each other so entirely,,,, plus the 'marriage' that ended the rs between the y! twin and the uke was a facade but the uke never finds out???
its so interesting. i'm rooting for them both (and something's up with the 'human' ml too for sure
non-toxic ending
this is crack cocaine for older top pseudo-incest fans do not listen to the comments it becomes absolutely bewildering for 10 chapters but look at the food. hyung kink mutual obsession insane top pretty art etc. also featuring: 'i was your brother, your friend, your father' inject it into my veins doctor
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