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This is pretty good, could have done more with the FL's acceptance to change after the betrayal. The only thing she had done was find him, accept the love from the people around her (which is good btw) and somehow the ML did the rest of the saving himself. The FL killing the prince felt like it should have been done the moment she arrived at the the place the ML was kidnapped. Overall though, good read. Will reread it again in the future. 4.5/5☆ (The chasing arc is pretty good too.)
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There's too many information I wished they had shown instead of told. Biggest gripe, they didn't show who held the information to the cure of never aging. The MC just suddenly got it in her first try, never showing HOW she was able to get it in the first try but for some reason, the Duke couldn't. Even some parts are inconsistent like she is able to purify with the ring sometimes and the alliance of the OGFL and brother seems weird in progression. Not a good binge read, 3.5/5☆
Pretty good. Idky I like Hyacinth the most, second is Carlein and third is Tasir. Sonnaught was good, I was rooting for him at first. HOWEVER, he seems greedy or too obsessed. I have a soft spot for Zaicin, the GOAT whenever someone is in danger. I wish they gave his character more importance. The plot is interesting, a good binge read. I just find it too much to add a Merfolk into the list of consorts. Still, looking forward to when it finishes. 4.2/5☆
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Idky, its so funny despite no Comedy tag in it. A good binge read though it's not done IIRC. I like the character development from the two, ML learning to embrace his feelings as a human and the FL learning to come to terms with his methods of surviving out of empathy. Pretty much a power couple, the guy has sepanx and yet she still went along with it until eventually the time needed to confront him was there. Pretty good, surprised there is spice in it. 4.4/5☆. Waiting to finish
4.2/5☆. My biggest gripe, if the focus was love, family and being human, I wish the ending had more conversation between God and the cursed children. To me, it just seems like a value diff because the dad is NOT human. Instead of pleading, insulting or condemning him, I just wished they expressed themselves more clearly. Understanding that they are just different and as a father and God, he will not back down, and the children, fighting for their love, will also not back down.
The Forgotten Field