great plot

great plot i like how edith carry herself like not rly fixated on the ori plot even though she's like that whenever with killian and i HATE killian at first hes so trash ugh but after knowing hes like that bcs of system and become self aware, i like him hoho and i also love the ending of OGedith & OGrhyse where they stay tgt awe and kinda pity cliff bcs hes a victim of author writing bcs hes not that trashy but the way he's the only charac who didnt get liberation is kinda sad lol

mel is so OP and her r/s with dominic is so cutee sibling code and direct rejection to cassian so no sml sydrone and isaac is so attractive and greeen and the kiddsss are so cute but some plot unclear like fx danny (dragon) introduced? the villains didnt die? how mel isekaid? but overall great for lighhearted reading

the early chapters were a bit slow (more like fillers) but interesting after they go to capital around ch40++ love how rudieger is complete person after confessing to judith, cold to blushing man >> and lucaa so cute in side stories where he IS a kid :(( this has the most healthy royal family ever (except the gramp) lol amd i love how franz die, not easy death like he did suffer from incapitation first and no prison etc so very satisfying ending AND THE WAY WE GOT RUDIEGER'S POV IN FIRST LIFE >>

this is such fun read and i stay for lime so cutee and their daughter turn to slime too awee but the god arc is so cringey tho and the climax is anticlimactic bcs irina power is not powering BUT the demon fight scene with lime is so unserious like the GREAT demon died bcs of toothpick size sword lmaoo and also plot hole for the ogFL like dont explain how irina thought alexei endup w/kay. no miscom as alexei tell fl that he's the slime also last amnesia/timeloop arc is so unnecessary & confusing.

lesset really be green red green just cause of his dragon instict lol but his red arc is so terrifying bruh charac dev elise is so good and lesset redemption is so greatly written this story overall is roller coaster and greatly written the war plan >> the chem elise/lesset & elise/andrie (siblingly) >> the baby w/ little wing >> but i wanna see what happen to the chained emperor lol overall 9.2/10