beta
Tbh this is quite good with the plot on how that world ends or how the bad things happen. However, the middle part is not it. Esp, the body proportion, the height, hair, face, and some of the expressions. But at the end of it, it was ok.
Secondly, i wish i could know more about the extra characters stories. De’s truly deserve the world more than Clo, i know im not in the position to compare them both when it comes to their past experience and on.
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Overall 6-
Tamen De Gushi