beta
something about this one really amused me XD
oh, gods, this was funny X'DD
kinda funny XD
not bad; kinda cute :)
Very well written and engaging to the last drop! Yes, it's a little obvious, but at least we sort of have a good idea at the end of who you practically expect to be the last holdout's, ahh, 'that's another story'-style romantic potential partner?
beautiful; the chapters flow somewhat like an ocean wave, too, very symbolic :) I like!
oh. my. gods. This is the one that makes Narcissus (as it be) a likeable character XD
interesting?
interesting, lol. And fast moving, even for a one-shot, so that helps speed things along.
this was actually really good XD
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