Bonnes idées mal utilisées.

Yaoi / Fantasy: Parallel world.
I should give it less knowing there's too much plot holes but I feel like I already read another end to it. Weird weird weird.
It could have been longer and show us more about the gate and how it is since it got closed. How will his parents react since he can't come back to its original world. Why did the children disappear etc.

The plot was interesting. Not the usual romance. There was action and angst. But then... There was the priest and the drawing in general. A redrawn version with the priest without those shoujo-like eyes would be pretty interesting.

I don't mind the ending, it was a great change and weirdly enough, not as sad as it could be. (at least they are alive)
It feels like the author gave us a summary of the manga. That's all. It could have been developed more because there's still too many "why" to me.
But it was still good.

It could have been interesting. Alpha x alpha, 2manly characters. But then, the author had to choose the usual drama about who's going to be the uke and not when the two of them could have been a reversible couple. It would have been more original and the thing with the mother to force them to have sex was just... Ugh.
Too bad, there was so much that could have been done with this, I don't understand why the author wasted those opportunities and great art.

It started good with a supernatural feel but this part got dropped after the first chapter. The author could have added some chapters (or not mention it at all) about the reason why the uke was affected by the incense and all. Why mention it if not to developpe it
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Good. But it could have been better. First by showing how they get to love each other. Actually, we see more of Aoi with the brother than with the Inugami. So there's not that much romance. Though their background and the thing about Inugami was explained, it would have been a bit longer but at least, we would have felt the love between them.

Great idea, mysterious seme, but well, the pace was weird.
It felt "normal" until I saw chap 6 being "the climax". It was too slow in that case and got rushed in two chapters for an ending. Too bad, I wouldn't have mind a longer but better done pace.

some scenes might be too much for your heart (gore & rape).
The plot seems quite interesting but too heavy for a simple one shot. If it were fully developped, it could have been really interesting to read.

4chapters. The end is just "that's it ?"
They could have dropped the usual rape scene and do smthg more elaborated at the end but nope. Why do original when you can stick with the usual manga ?
Too bad.

If a but more developped it would have been better. Sometimes, it feels like there are chapters missing but nope.