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The first story is great. It took me three times of "What the Fuck is this shitty manga?" before I decided to force myself to finish reading it. And I am pleased to write that this is indeed a good Yaoi manga. Yes the characters may be a little cracked in the head but No one is perfect and well, their life now is back on track and very beautiful to read. I am a sucker for lovey-dovey (^_^).
The second one was funny and light, like a desert after a heavy meal. It balance the entire concept.
It's first to actually sit and read a novel online, and I loved it. It's a Slice of Life and personally it opened my eyes in some ways.
It is a mature Love Relationship. The Uke is understanding and not whiny like many Uke I've read. The Seme too, he is not that forceful bastard like many 'typical' ones. I really love that manga. And s much I as want for it to update, I am also very happy to have read it. Love is also about letting go, if that is the only way to protect that loved one.
That old man and the young lady had something very precious, and I am glad that in his final moments, the boss could've met his son.
Haru-chan wa Hoshigari Yokubari