buttertale

cute dynamic. childhood friend. Ryu is the son of Yakuza. Naoki is his childhood friend who’s pretty tough.
1 ( ° ʖ °) scene in the last pages. mostly fluff and gangster drama.

a ghost fucks him. its a rather aggressive naughty rough ghost. and- it’s possessive as fuck. Then the ghost feels bad, and is like my bad

theres a body swap involved. personalities are interesting, the dynamic is cool. The characters personalities to actions dont feel like they make sense sometimes. the body swap is not explained properly and that plot element isnt tied up.

daddy is handsome and he is mature considerate.
He also fucks up the first sexy scene. Consolation is, that he makes up for it later. but, he majorly kills the mood for me throughout the entire story cause then the story only builds up to the fuck. Nothing really expanding their relationship beyond this point of wanting to fuck - Which makes what he did- babydad stopping cause he was freaked out - in that first scene more out of place.

Beauty is a key concept in this one. It felt a little unfinished as I wouldve liked to see their relationship blossom a little more- add a deeper progression for depth/ layers to it. So the concepts and art are beautiful. but its a little shallow