It was a bit short, and the fact that she fell in love with her "hero" is understandable and sweet because she was just a little kid, and I guess it's cute how she held onto it for so long, but the fact that he just agrees to "love" her is kind of sudden. There really wasn't a lot of chemistry between characters portrayed through out the short story, not enough to explain his returned feelings anyways.
Nonetheless, the idea is really cute, yet how it turned out to be was quite cliche!
Really cute story. I love how she's so persistent and the father (Ren) is kind of childish in some situation, and at the end gets really awkward. I wish it were a bit longer, but it still had a great end.
There's a lot of plot that needed to be covered in 50-something pages, and it all felt a bit rushed, yet unlike some other one-shots, this one had an ending that felt kind of right. It's not one of my favorites, but the idea would be amazing if it weren't so rushed.
Really super cute! One of my absolute favorite one-shots, even though it has such an open end and we can't see the characters interact that much and we don't know what happens to their relationship.
SO FREAKING CUTE! But I feel like the love is a tiny bit one-sided, at the start at least.
Tonari No Inuyama-kun