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The story is nice but I felt like he should've ended with another person.
Story is nice, but it seems like everyone including me wants him with the other guy
Has a very good idea but its completed?? Seems like the prologue
Had a good idea and potential but it ended in the middle of the climax.
It was enjoyable and had a lot of potential but it just ended at a weird spot where they don't confirm their feelings for each other.
It's a cute story but it feels very incomplete.
Feels very incomplete.
Really good but the ending sort of leaves you on a cliff hanger.
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