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I'm only putting this story into my absolute list because the Seme is just.... fuck he's just too hot + cute! OMG the perfect character design ever!!!
The story itself is 3-4 / 5, could have been better if more chapters were written but for short stories it's okay.
Anyway, the seme..... LIKE DAMN!
it's my absolute favorite, not because of the plot, but rather the second couple uke!! OMG OMG ! That's a fine man indeed
At first I was all into the first couple, but then... the second couple came..... the uke in the second couple..... oh dear God, Like i had always found him cute in during the first act, but now in the second act........... my heart melts. He's tooooo freaking handsome! His hair, his face, his body, his Personality! OMG OMG, he's a candidate for the uke of the year (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
NOTE: The side story is A LOT BETTER than the original story!!!
It's about the seme starting to fall for the uke and trying to get close to him. It's pure golden comedy! I just wish the author would write the entire the book again (though it's impossible and time is money) and make the story a slice of life
so 5/5: Side
2/5 Original plot, since it barely made sense. and both the uke/seme felt more like SIDE characters than a main!!!! .___.
Gyangu no Kai-kata