beta
It has some errs here and there, especially the rushed ending and the oh-so-kind dumbass uke. I wished the seme chased him when the uke moved on. I hope there's a sequel plss, seme's redemption wasn't enough. I put it in my favorite list just for the reason that I haven't read anything good lately xD
If I had to say what I really like about this was the effing really good plot twist, and the seme being one of the realest and complex BL characters I've read... for once.
Online Game Nakama to Sashi Off shitara Shokuba no Onijoushi ga Kita.