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the art is fricking amazing. but the storyline is a fucking trainwreck. characters are sex-crazed for like no explicable reason & rape each other left & right. there’s barely any actual relationship development, the plot just sucks.
shit plot, shplot.
tbvh i really dl mindless harem without much plot. i want characters to be relevant & actually make sense :-/
let's all play "spot! the! plot!" u don't see it? yeah i fucking thought so.
wtf man. pretending to be disabled i could understand if she was legitimately traumatised to the point where she COULDN'T speak. but she's just CHOOSING not to speak & making everyone around her feel so fucking bad. the plot fucking sucks. whoever fucking published it is just serving pure disrespect on a platter.
shitty male mc, average female mc
plot kinda sucks balls
mom & dad ftw
god damn this is so fucking boring.
fuckin sux. why are the straights like this. jk kmn i hate everything AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IT'S SO BAD. from the weird plot to the horrible timing & shit dialogue. i hate it with all my heart bro wtf. the girl is fucking weird. the guy is trying to act cool. i am trying to not cringe.
porno-like plot. really this was 100% for the smut. it's not as bad as the others on this list. but it's still like :/ bc like srsly, the having sex on the train without anyone noticing,, really sneak 100 ya
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