HMMMM im not that sure what to feel about this, the story was promising and the way it could have been developed, but the way it was executed was just not it for me. Too many holes in the story, and the rape part was just.. that's all I will say about it. However, it was actually pretty cute and a kind of turn on with the smut, but I dont think I will reread this.
HMMMM this did not become what I expected, the writing style and the plot is a bit all over the place and feel a little bit lazy later. It was entertaining at first, but there were just so many actions of the characters i did not quite understand like why was the mc so mean to charles for a small reason, why introduce him first, and suddenly jullian and him are together?? and zac is cute but it was abit rushed but I am still enjoying reading it. However disappointed with ending.
HAAHAHAH this was funny and short. Not much of a story but it was entertaining and smut like.
This is pretty short. For a short story, its okay and pretty cute. There are just some no no's in this story like unconsented sex. I know some people into to that so read it if you want. If you could get past that issue its s a pretty decent read. Its cliche and the trope of the story is used so often. Would not reread but its cute or whatever.
ahahaha wow pretty interesting read. I like the twisted ending, and how everyone is pretty fucked up. Sex scene is hot i guess but just thinking of how twisted it is makes me go ehhh. Anyways I wouldnt reread it but I def recommend reading it atleast once, but you won't really be missing much :)
AHAHAHAHAH WTF WAS THIS. I have to give props to the author for creating such a unique and creative plot HAHAHAHA but this is so like random HAHAHAHA.
the story was cool, didnt like the ending, wished they didnt end up together. a bit fucked up the story, but art and sex great.
wowww I really like the ending of the first chapter and the use of biblical themes and word choices. The pace and suspense building up really gets you hooked. Overall, its very confusing with no direct direction? Very messy and out of pace. The art was really good tho and they both looked hot. So scary to think cults like this exist. Very biblical and culty, but I do have to say I like the title of this story. Its okay to read, some were hot, but very rapey. Father Peter was hot tho ngl, wellall
Renai Fuyuki Todoki