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Ch. 3-7. Too cute! And realistic. Two gay guys. One of them has little daughter. Scruffy guy is scruffy here and that's fine. There is no makeover. The other guy has growth and longer hair, but it's all a part of carefull stilization.
Ch. 1-3. A bit rushed but funny. This time, scruffy guy is really scruffy, manly on the outside and a bit childish on the inside. Also - quick makeover takes the scruff away. Pity.
Ch. 1. The scruff was cute, the other guy was cute, they started to like each other before the makeover, but the plot was rushed like a toilet flux!
No romance. Just filthy, filthy fantasizing. Scruff is a sculptor.
It was tireing. I didn't really finished it. From the second rape-y situation I just watched the pictures so I could say I've read it. The scruff's look was my type, but it was about everything that was all right with the story.
Ch. 1. Well, cute but boring.
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