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Read this one twice, it's not too bad. But I wish there was more to the story. It seemed too short and lacking somehow.
This one had the potential to be better; the plot really lacked in the main story. I understand the seme was inexperienced and young, but he was a little too dunce for my liking.
Several stories. Love the art!
Nice romance. The man was extremely patient.
It's okay.
I really like the story and the characters, but it just wasn't long enough. I wanted more with them after they'd become a couple.
Pretty boys.
Yep, another one shot that needs to be expanded into a longer story. Need more!
Koishite Daddy