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do really like this but ughhhh the slow burn is torture!!!!
Plus I'm so skeptical of the development of them now dating???? Like idk it just kinda happened. A part of me thinks this is somewhat superficial, they'll break up for inexplicable reasons, and then get back together fr.
This was really fantastic. The first 30 chapters I didn't give a shit about because it was so painful to see a hopeless MC pining over the ML, and the ML just being a fucking dick. But the main miscommunication shifted to a more compelling and lovely story. Omg I cried so many times. I think the situation shipped that they went through felt so relatable and really struck a nerve lol. Both MC's characters and their trauma and how it affects how they see relationships make so much sense.
gahhhhhhhh4.25 Very sad and very sweet seme. A tad melodramatic but really touches that "self-loathing tortured soul wanting to be saved and seen" nerve lolol
Omg this is so beautiful. It's very quiet, slow and Serene. So lovely. It has such a quiet Japanese feel to it
Very beautiful. Fuck this was so real and raw about a relationship running its course and getting stale. Super relatable and triggered memories that TBH didn't care to feel LOL.
It's super well written. My only issue is that I wish that The couple actually stayed broken up. While it's really sweet that they did end up back together, I feel like the way that they they showed the couple 's problems throughout the story. Kind of confirmed that their relationship is done.
OMG this was wonderful. The pacing was so thoughtful and lovely. The tone was so mature and the author seems to really understand human connection. The two MCS falling in love felt so believable.
When the seme compared age differences and sexuality to be no different from something like being from a different town or rooting for different teams was so beautiful.
I adore this story and this couple. So well written and absolutely a new favorite
UGHHHHH SO ANNOYING. The story was such a delight and of course they had to fuck up the last arc. The slow progression of the MCs feelings of contempt to sympathy to adoration was slow burning but felt so sincere and well earned. I loved how much the characters subtly change because of one another and help build each other up.
BUT then of course! The ml had to regress a bunch and became this needy obsessive controlling psycho. And yeah sure he has always had those tendencies.
Lost in the Cloud