beta
B-
This plot just....Bruh like I laughed out loud from how ridiculous this story is. Also kinda hate how the Trans supporting character was handled. Best boi material right there.
D-
Feel the same way I feel about that one shot Yuri "Free & Splash", cute collection and I like it slightly more prob cause its longer and stuff. But for the most part I feel like the stories were kinda forgettable and meh.
C+
Its okay. Just your typical ml fucking a bunch of girls. Love the art and I wish the ML kept his hair the way that hairdresser styled it in that one chapter. Oh and endgame girl is cool too. Doesn't deserve any slut shaming for whatever kinky shit she did with her ex. She doesn't get shamed in the comic but I just saw comments about that on another site. Like men really are trash smh. and lowkey the crush ML has on FL is cute. It's just awe gush gush
C-
Love the art and the Pink haired girl and White haired guy couple. There my favorite characters just because of how hot they look. I Like the smut but aside from that the plot just frustrates me and confuses me but I give it points for trying. Oh and the male lead and his girlfriend have no chemistry.
B-
Love the smut and the two girls but don't like ML
A C+ that is borderline a B-
Cause God do I have some thoughts and I am just not mentally ready to state it yet but I have some mixed thoughts but for the most part I think the webcomic was good
C+? B-? I'm not sure
Dang that ending messed me up a little, I cant help but feel mournful? A bit melancholic? I'm still processing how I feel so how I feel is subject to change.
Fucking S Tier shit
TW cause there is rape. I know it's a joke to say that you read hentai for the plot but if you had to read a hentai for the plot it would be this one. Originally picked it up because pretty lady main character but THIS right here is some good shit mhm
C-
Wish the worldbuilding was explained more. They had mostly dropped the magical aspects in the end and it was just drama. Felt like this story was extremely rushed and had too much going on with how short it is. And look, I know it's Smut but I couldn't help but cringe during Narea's fantasy scenes for some reason. I came to read smut but I just dont know man... like at this point i feel like I'm not reading smut for smut but I am? IDk
D+
The cover art is super pretty and drew me in. I didn't realize that it was an omega verse Yuri. I didn't like it that much but I'll give points for art and it's not like there was anything that pissed me off. If anything my biggest complaint would be I just felt the story wasn't very clear. Oh and there's an age gap so if your not into that it's there.
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