Ok so I'm pretty sure it was only me, but I was lost asf almost the entire time I read this. But toward the end I finally started to understand what was going on and happened to soak my pillow with tears of joy. I rate this a 7/10
ok, ngl the seme was totally my type- and the uke was too frikin cute>< but like wtf dood, your little brother fell in love with you- It doesn't tell us how exactly just his brother was there when he had his first heat. Anyway, I'm really happy with how it turned out in the end.ᵉᵛᵉⁿ ᵗʰᵒ ⁱ ʰᵃᵗᵉ ᵗʰᵉ ᵇʳᵒᵗʰᵉʳ ANYWAY, I'd give this a 9/10
OK let's see why do I like this? No rapeHot peopleCOMMUNICATIONTHIS WAS SO FLUFFY AND ADORABLE!!!! AHHHHH I'M SCREAMING AT HOW CUTE THIS WAS!!! You NEED to read this. The only thing I wish we saw was the kids BUT READ IT IT'S A SOLID 10/10
Me being the dumb bich I am didn't understand most of this but I gotta say-
THE CHILDREN ARE SO CUTE WTF GIVE ME ONE OR ILL STEAL ONE-
*cough cough* ANYWAY! I'd rate this a 6/10!
The art is beautiful, and so is the seggs
They are both really hot and pretty and I really loved how the story developed. And ik I say this all the time but I really loved the art. I'd rate this a 10/10
Ima just say it now but, when they first have seggs it's super hawt. The ending was a little disappointing because they didn't get married or pair but it really was a cute story. I'd rate this a 9/10, 9 being I wasn't really satisfied with the end.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Yes, this is a Yuri, BUT IT SO FUCKING CUTE SHXHANXNAKSJQLZN
Ah ma gad ya have to read this PLEASE THEY ARE SO CUTE FRICKING 10/10
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