dropped

for now? forever?

the back and forth, the wishy-washiness, nothing was straight forward
also, scenes jumped form one to the next with no coherency that made it difficult to follow along
sexy times weren't worth reading cuz it happened out of the blue- foreplay is there for a reason. at least make me interested in the characters choices, into them fucking

@59

not bad just
kinda goes on forever

and harem

going no where
and its at the point that is uncomfortable with him fucking the son and the father at the same time

i really couldnt
dropped at 32
it was just really bad and no development. such bullshit