Hmmm..... It had great potential, but it became choppy, confusing, drawn out, and then rushed. When someone died, it was sudden and didn't make sense. It was good until it got to the climax, then it fell apart.
I agree. I actually thought it started slow and almost put it down, then it started to roll and I couldn't stop... and then... I dunno. It kind of fell apart. It was like it needed to be 2 volumes longer and they tried to cram it into just a few chapters or with a few 'oh, I forgot to explain this' scenes thrown in too late for good measure. Even the epilogue chap didn't clear things up much. Got more from the character's ending summaries than from the actual end of the story and epiloge. Yes, great potential, but didn't pan out in the end. :(
Ugh, it's sad to see plots that have so much potential rushed so quickly to their end... it's like the author couldn't get enough on the polls to keep the tale going since it was so drawn out at the start, but any good story does need some lengthy parts. /:
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I read this so many times but still dont get the ending
Really liked it but felt rushed in the end and the ending was kinda shitty (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Hmmm..... It had great potential, but it became choppy, confusing, drawn out, and then rushed. When someone died, it was sudden and didn't make sense. It was good until it got to the climax, then it fell apart.
I agree. I actually thought it started slow and almost put it down, then it started to roll and I couldn't stop... and then... I dunno. It kind of fell apart. It was like it needed to be 2 volumes longer and they tried to cram it into just a few chapters or with a few 'oh, I forgot to explain this' scenes thrown in too late for good measure. Even the epilogue chap didn't clear things up much. Got more from the character's ending summaries than from the actual end of the story and epiloge. Yes, great potential, but didn't pan out in the end. :(
I couldn't agree more!
Ugh, it's sad to see plots that have so much potential rushed so quickly to their end... it's like the author couldn't get enough on the polls to keep the tale going since it was so drawn out at the start, but any good story does need some lengthy parts. /:
Too many repeaters (chapters) （￣へ￣）
This story is cool it ... I thinks this could be girl.. she did this break the seal of the four gods.
.....=.=
They need to organize the chapters but it was a good story! I wish they would update more!
Ugh, the order of the chapters....=__=
I know right annoying