Telling a story visually, rather than through dialogue and exposition is no easy feat. What occurs when you fail, is this manga. The visuals here, although beautifully drawn, lack the story telling details that make the important plot points obvious. Leaving the reader feeling as though they are missing what is really going on in the story. You're left with a "half told" story and confused readers. Too much dialogue and exposition can be distracting and confusing, but, as seen here, too little is also equally confusing.
,the art was nice, especially the hair. The stories were translated pretty bad, the second one. Not much to them either ,although I like the first one:)
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So um, Kita had feelings for Satou since High School?
Telling a story visually, rather than through dialogue and exposition is no easy feat. What occurs when you fail, is this manga. The visuals here, although beautifully drawn, lack the story telling details that make the important plot points obvious. Leaving the reader feeling as though they are missing what is really going on in the story. You're left with a "half told" story and confused readers. Too much dialogue and exposition can be distracting and confusing, but, as seen here, too little is also equally confusing.
,the art was nice, especially the hair. The stories were translated pretty bad, the second one. Not much to them either ,although I like the first one:)
this manga so bored, waste my time to read this (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Good stories awsome read
I only came for the library story... It gave me warm feeling but lack something~~~
I love both couples..i love the first story but second story i liked it very very much more so then the first
The feels wasn't that strong for me but the stories are still passable for the most part.
Love all the the story.
love it
Really cute ^^
Like the first story the most <3