Me encantó, lo amé, aunque es cierto que quizá fue uin poco forzado por lo corto que es, tal vez hubiera sido necesario hacerla un poquito más larga a la historia para que quedara mejor (▰˘◡˘▰)
It wasn't a bad story at all but...how do I say this? The exposition was a bit... forced? Especially on chapter 8 (where I had to pause for now), it seems like the author throws in characters to force the plot along, rather than develops the characters and let the plot flow from them organically. It's a subtle difference but it really changes the way the story is received, imo.
Ex: chapter 8, the guy with the glasses is explaining the fight as it's happening and, miraculously, as soon as he explains what Tiji did and the problems he now faces, Tiji manages to get past the problem instantly! The entire scene just seemed so awkward, it reminded me of this page in Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun, where the background characters are desperately trying to build a background story for the MC (≧∀≦) http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/gekkan_shoujo_nozaki_kun/mf/v02/c026/5/
I get what you're saying. It feels pretty rushed throughout, and to be honest it makes it feel like kind of a waste to read. I like manga like this, but when the MC always ends up winning it's pretty disappointing. Also the fact that the characters are just quickly talked about and that's it, makes me feel like there isn't much of a story line.
It was absolutely awesome and it was an honour to read this mangaヾ(☆▽☆) but the frames were all messed up and hard to follow and it ended waaaay too quickly. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Nih manga garing abis! Waktu buka chapter 1, gue kirain scanlation-nya error jadinya longkap ke pertengahan cerita. Ternyata enggak... This manga is a 'Meh!' ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ . Males, bo~ pake bhs. Inggris, lagi pengen pake bhs. alay. Biar gaul dikit.
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im sorry, but the girl is mad annoying.
Aww
this story 2 fast
yeah, but it was nice
Me encantó, lo amé, aunque es cierto que quizá fue uin poco forzado por lo corto que es, tal vez hubiera sido necesario hacerla un poquito más larga a la historia para que quedara mejor (▰˘◡˘▰)
It wasn't a bad story at all but...how do I say this? The exposition was a bit... forced? Especially on chapter 8 (where I had to pause for now), it seems like the author throws in characters to force the plot along, rather than develops the characters and let the plot flow from them organically. It's a subtle difference but it really changes the way the story is received, imo.
Ex: chapter 8, the guy with the glasses is explaining the fight as it's happening and, miraculously, as soon as he explains what Tiji did and the problems he now faces, Tiji manages to get past the problem instantly! The entire scene just seemed so awkward, it reminded me of this page in Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun, where the background characters are desperately trying to build a background story for the MC (≧∀≦) http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/gekkan_shoujo_nozaki_kun/mf/v02/c026/5/
I get what you're saying. It feels pretty rushed throughout, and to be honest it makes it feel like kind of a waste to read. I like manga like this, but when the MC always ends up winning it's pretty disappointing. Also the fact that the characters are just quickly talked about and that's it, makes me feel like there isn't much of a story line.
It was absolutely awesome and it was an honour to read this mangaヾ(☆▽☆) but the frames were all messed up and hard to follow and it ended waaaay too quickly. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Should have been made as a 10 chapters story... perhaps?
or 100...
Nih manga garing abis! Waktu buka chapter 1, gue kirain scanlation-nya error jadinya longkap ke pertengahan cerita. Ternyata enggak...
This manga is a 'Meh!' ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ
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Males, bo~ pake bhs. Inggris, lagi pengen pake bhs. alay. Biar gaul dikit.
it was a bit short and the end was too rushed. but i still like it.
the end was boring, it was too short. Everything was rushed. It was like trying to fit 20 people in a small car.
Would have been nice if this was longer