hmmm. I wish it has more well paced and delivered story, I mean, it seemed a bit rushed? And now I want to see how Anri grew since the point of this manga is to choose the successor and train him. And now I want to see more of that.
When i start reading this i say "looks interesting" but while continuing...it makes me more puzzled at what's really happening. I'm reading the lines but can't understand the meaning of it and asking my self "what the fuck is wrong with my brain!! I can't understand a fucking thing in this" I just so pissed about the whole thing and i keep punching my pillow like "urgggghhh GRRRRR !!!" Sorry! I don't know who's to blame. The translation or the mangaka.
one day a yaoi mangaka started writing a shounen themed manga with yaoi sex... and then forgot about the part where the plot makes sense. lol maybe the steam of the smex got on her glasses and she kind of forgot to add the parts that made the plot believable lmao. well the bits of sexy steamy scenes were nice *thumbs up*
It's like a rushed version of some pretty good yaoi stories. It had a lot of potential, just execution was lacking in terms of fleshing out the characters and moving the plot and transitioning into the sex scenes.
...shitty delivery. The plot concept has incredible potential, but the writing was unfocused, confusing at times and rushed. The characters seem to have been developed hastily and, although I read yaoi for the sex, in this case, it seemed to get in the characters' way. There was no smooth transition or reason for most of the encounters and only two encounters moved either the plot forward, or character growth. In short, it felt like the mangaka took a great seinen manga and shoe-horned a bunch of sex scenes into it. Neither fit the others story line. That said, the sex scenes were okay (what was shown) and I enjoyed them, if I ignored the plot. Conversely, if I ignored the sex, the plot was enjoyable. I think the mangaka should have just picked a genre for this story and stuck with it. IMHO
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The mangaka had an idea for a story and never followed through with it. The plot blew away in the wind.
hmmm. I wish it has more well paced and delivered story, I mean, it seemed a bit rushed? And now I want to see how Anri grew since the point of this manga is to choose the successor and train him. And now I want to see more of that.
That was really cute and the fact that I love Megane Semes hehe
I wish if there is season two! I really like this manga.
When i start reading this i say "looks interesting" but while continuing...it makes me more puzzled at what's really happening. I'm reading the lines but can't understand the meaning of it and asking my self "what the fuck is wrong with my brain!! I can't understand a fucking thing in this" I just so pissed about the whole thing and i keep punching my pillow like "urgggghhh GRRRRR !!!" Sorry! I don't know who's to blame. The translation or the mangaka.
Its ok I got the same feeling it was good but the pacing was just a little off. It was way to choppy and it made the story line hard to ubderstand.
Lol same same.. I dont understand what happened.. well if theyre happy then its ok i guess.. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I thought it was just me who was confused haha
one day a yaoi mangaka started writing a shounen themed manga with yaoi sex... and then forgot about the part where the plot makes sense. lol
maybe the steam of the smex got on her glasses and she kind of forgot to add the parts that made the plot believable lmao. well the bits of sexy steamy scenes were nice *thumbs up*
Man u stole my words
It's like a rushed version of some pretty good yaoi stories. It had a lot of potential, just execution was lacking in terms of fleshing out the characters and moving the plot and transitioning into the sex scenes.
...shitty delivery. The plot concept has incredible potential, but the writing was unfocused, confusing at times and rushed. The characters seem to have been developed hastily and, although I read yaoi for the sex, in this case, it seemed to get in the characters' way. There was no smooth transition or reason for most of the encounters and only two encounters moved either the plot forward, or character growth. In short, it felt like the mangaka took a great seinen manga and shoe-horned a bunch of sex scenes into it. Neither fit the others story line.
That said, the sex scenes were okay (what was shown) and I enjoyed them, if I ignored the plot. Conversely, if I ignored the sex, the plot was enjoyable. I think the mangaka should have just picked a genre for this story and stuck with it. IMHO
Awesome concept
Is there a continuation? It was getting really good!
Bad English is a big turn off :/
lol for us that english isn't native it isn't the problem xD
I like this story alot more please thanks;)