So not really my thing but nice art and good job drawing what a just fucked butthole looks like-in yaoi it's always closed up but in reality it kinda stays open for a bit-so I think I would have definitely liked it more if after leaving the guy who he turned gay (except dude seemed to only turn gay for him) if that guy had found love with some guy in his life-but I'm a girl and the comman wisdom about men being aroused more visually and women more mentally holds true for me-it's not true for everyone but most guys I've known could get off just looking at hot pictures of a female/male (depending on their persuasion)and most girls needed a story to go with it or even just the story-guys can totally get into a storyline too but it doesn't seem as necessary
Priapus