Comrade Mommy's manga / #Rape(6)

First was pitifully sad-second was romantically and tragically sad-third was.... Something else-perfection-dark and broken-gave this five stars on the last on by itself

I love the dark relationship between the two main characters but the art and lack of graphic ness annoys me-kinda looks like a 90's yaoi-I don't need to see the bulging veins on a cock or anything but at least don't make the guys have blank areas for genitals or worse the dick shaped lighter area in darker shading with opalescent drips coming off

The main couple was cute but I gave this four stars for the secondary couple-I adored the angst with that storyline-it gave me that angsty heart twang I adore but don't get often enough

Nice art and interesting it but it was a lot to try to squeeze into a one shot so it ultimately was disappointing-I gave it 3 *'s because the art was nice and the sex scenes were we done but the lack of passion made even the nicely done and explicit sex kinds boring- if this had been stretched out over several chapters it could have been pretty awesome-oh well-such is yaoi

A lot of things I wish were different about this manga-I really wish the uke was different or at least there was a reason for him to be so devoted to the seme but I love the abusive seme storyline-adore it enough to forgive the shit parts and say fuck it give 4 stars-I love the seme character-it's not even that I dislike the uke-I just really wish the mangaka had given a reason for his devotion-showed a reason for him love the seme-like maybe the seme was a Jekyll and Hyde character and he had multiple experiences with the kind side that turned to love-or even shown a dark history that caused him to mistake abuse with love-oh well maybe one day I'll find a manga with the elements of this story I love without the particular they irritate the fuck outta me

Because the art is awesome and it's Zaria I gave it five ️'S but if your triggered easily the check the tags-this isn't yaoi rape-this is pretty rough