Tai's manga / #twisted(2)

well goodness that was a Ride. there's alot of cyclical thoughts and dialogue on here. its a bit exhausting to read at times. its very dark and fucked up but not scary or nauseating the way killing stalking is. just a very different vibe despite the really creepy beginning. they both need massive psychiatric help tbh but since this is fiction i couldnt help but want those two crazy kids to work it out somehow and then they do! yay? ngl its a bit of an anti climactic ending. i dont think a tragic ending woulda been better just cause it woulda been patently obvious so rather smth less pitch black woulda been refreshing but this ending just felt kind of...idk flat. i think it works better if u read it all together with the final chpt, it feels like a nice reprieve from all the intense emotion and action then. also gonna be honest, didnt care about those other two criminal guys. at all. anyway gonna leave it at 4 stars tho since it was a good and sexy thriller. i think its fair to call it an erotic thriller right?

this was....so stupid lol. but SO serious? like it was so Intense and Dramatic and had those artful panels meant to evoke like this grand thoughtful imagery and deep symbolism and im like....m'am, u just wrote a scene where two dudes had raw sex on a bus seat. like...the amount of DISEASES they both would've caught...so like basically this story hinges on rape, rape and more rape. like again its the kind of Sexy Intense Dubcon rape we see in these kinds of BL stories. but the reasoning for it so...and that ALL their sex scenes happen in the same dirty ass bus...i mean yes i read all of it but because i was like...baffled and curious as to hwo it would work. and ofc this guy managed to magically shove his dick into an asshole that very much did not want to be penetrated without ANY lube or stretching and like...idk how to tell u this author but it legit wouldnt go in, its not that it would it would be Impossible and mans woulda got his dick broken mid way like cmon now lol. like this is offensive yes but i mostly found it...laughable? like i just couldnt take it seriously at all and it was taking itself SO SO seriously. like this bitch didnt just try to write porn but wanted to make it deep but instead of actually making it deep...just makes this. i dont recommend it but i also...dont not recommend it? like its kinda worth it just to read how like absurd it is. the final sex scene is kinda hot too but after WHAT i ask u. (but seriously! a bus! gross!) also the guys reason for blackmailing him and the other ones reason for going along with it and also how this leads to the acceptance of a decade long deferred love (and also how the other dude managed to rape his classmate back in HS in the middle of like a hallway, again without...any prep...and then was like "ugh whatever" and left him there and...MAKE IT MAKE SENSE!)