juu ♡'s manga / #cute art(2)

the writing was very poor honestly. The seme and the boss were both pieces of shits, and the uke obviously didn't like the seme at all but because of the shitty writing of course in the last couple chapters the uke suddenly accepts the seme's feelings even though he obviously wasn't having his bullshit during all the other chapters. This needed a lot more chapters because that seme had no character development whatsoever, that boss needed to have his business taken away because he clearly does not know how to take care of his employees and the uke's character was changed last minute to fit the ending of the manga which is stupid. I see what the author was trying to do but they failed.

uh the uke is such a pushover. Like imagine someone telling you "fuck off bitch/whore" because you avoided them for a little bit (even though you've been chasing after them from the moment you two met) and you somehow think it's your fault and that you should apologize to them?? Huh?? And the seme is a little shit I swear. He did come to the realization that he liked the uke at the end, but I couldn't even tell if he was being genuine. Also, his whole issue was that people only liked him (or pretended to) because he was a wolf but the uke only liked him because of his looks??? So how is that any different??? Like that man could not list one good personality trait for the seme. 5/10.