Ash's manga / #Magic(9)

It was good, I expected more steamy scenes that included magical sex toys since there's so many possibilities with that concept. Also for some reason the short story felt too short, I honestly wanted more resolution. Having noticed that in many comics I read, it's becoming a pet peeve of mine lol

I absolutely love the art and the story, but (spoilers) the chapters nearing the end really made me confused? I mean I don't know if I'm just forgetful, but where the hell did Will come from??? Also who is he??? The ending also feels abrupt, but overall it's nice.

Loved the first story, though even that was ruined by Taiki. I hate how he literally r*ped his supposed love interest in the final chapter. Ugh I wish he were a better character, or removed from the story. It's like preparing the perfect breakfast only to realise that you're drinking spoiled milk.

Would've liked it more if there were a bit of more closure, like are they still going to school? What about rebuilding the orphanage? There's a few more questions I have that've been set aside.

NOOOO THIS WAS TOO GOOD FOR IT TO BE JUST 5 CHAPTERS, but like even just those chapters were already fucking heaven on earth. Ah I'm greedy for more (ಥ﹏ಥ)

The author really gave us the hint that they'd use the lingere and didn't show us Lmao this was still good tho

Ok hold on it's great, but the pacing of it felt like a flash. Like I sort of get the end after a few minutes of thinking about it, but it's overall just hard to digest each chapter when it's presented so fast. Wish there was extras to give more closure ╥﹏╥