Niyra's manga / #Rape(9)

Sad, angry, confused

If you were gentle fro the beginning and followed proper courtship you would've had him from the get go

You do know what your doing is rape right 、like only asking for consent near the end. If it wasn't for the rape plot the whole manga would've been top of the morning

Feels like the characters are too unexplored. A back story would build character. Not only that the uke is just... How do i put it, unrealistic and overly dependent and etc. Maybe I'm just overthinking it for a smut. Only continuing to read it to see if it gets a bit better. Continued it and its getting better, happy it wasn't a magically fix everything just because I'm with my lover situation. The self- destructive behaviour is actually well written, unrealistic but a bit understandable as I think your trying to write the uke as a highly sensitive individual. It's still feels a bit off, the story I mean but it's readible. I feel like a reboot might actually help it, I also think it might be translations conveying the story out of tune. Will check the raw uploads No to romanticism of rape.