Feels like the characters are too unexplored. A back story would build character. Not only that the uke is just... How do i put it, unrealistic and overly dependent and etc. Maybe I'm just overthinking it for a smut. Only continuing to read it to see if it gets a bit better.
Continued it and its getting better, happy it wasn't a magically fix everything just because I'm with my lover situation. The self- destructive behaviour is actually well written, unrealistic but a bit understandable as I think your trying to write the uke as a highly sensitive individual. It's still feels a bit off, the story I mean but it's readible.
I feel like a reboot might actually help it, I also think it might be translations conveying the story out of tune. Will check the raw uploads
No to romanticism of rape.
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