Maybeblue's manga / #Time travel(8)

This story is cute and pretty engaging but if you want to enjoy it you'll have to ignore all the plot holes and welcome all the facts that are given for granted without any explanation. It can be worth reading if you want the feels, not so much if you're interested in a well written supernatural setting. It's not a short story but it never gets boring and the pacing keeps your attention pretty high and the angsty and sad parts were interesting too. If I were to point out what is keeping this from being a fave of mine I'd say the first 20-25 chapters are a bit weak and I could tell the author adjusted some things later on in the story (like with Jay's character I think it was weird how suddenly he changed personality) and I think the two stories were a bit too disconnected, to the point that it would have probably been better to develop the second couple's story as a separate, indipendent and longer story of it's own. Also there were so many cringy scenes...especially when the bias thing was mentioned it felt like I was reading a wattpad story or something...when Juno struggles because mc isn't giving him a chance and goes "because Jay was his bias all along" plsss sir noooo