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ALisAnimeLover's manga / #fujoshi(2)

Bright Light Sprout

Complete | Ichikawa Kei | 2000 released

The story has a lot of... not really plot holes but simply weak points. 1) Okay, so Haruto learns that Ren is having sex with some old dude. He is not entirely sure if this is consensual or not, but he has a huge hunch it isn't given Ren's situation. But instead of thinking whether or not to report this to the police or doing anything concrete, he merely contemplates about how he feels about Ren. Uh-huh. 2) So apparently, the rapist dude is not Daddy Long Legs (what a plot twist!), but rather his secretary who he trusted to give money to Ren and report to him about Ren's situation. Being Daddy Long Legs, why couldn't he simply give Ren a credit/debit card and contact him regularly? And just let the secretary/care taker report once in a while, but maintaining contact with Ren. This way, Ren could have reported to him about the situation. 3) The whole plot twist that it was just the secretary and not Daddy Long Legs - that DLL is actually kind, is most probably because the author wanted the manga's ending to be how it did (long separation until they meet again) . 4) Again, in the ending, DLL took Ren abroad with no problems. So why didn't he do that a long time ago? For the drama. The whole story just wanted to revolve around a "realistic world" where one of the characters has a very "out-of-this-world" background story. And it's not executed well.

Orokamono ga Koi o Shitara.

Complete | Hiwatari haruki | 2000 released

as the comments say, "too much dialogue, not much happening" I love their friends though~ Supportive friends are the best! +1 star for this hahaha Also, I like how the sensei liked the MC from the start as a minor 'crush' only because of looks/vibes, and nothing cliche like "you helped me before blah blah".