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Starsandmetaphors's manga / #Poorly executed(1)

Hana Rai

Complete | HIMURA Toru | 2017 released
2017-08-23 10:40 marked

Personally, I really hated this story. It was so rushed. I wouldn't even be salty about Madoka and Mitsuki ending up together IF IT WAS HANDLED BETTER. But this was done so, so poorly. I had to literally read the previous chapters to make sure I didn't miss anything. He was literally trying to SEDUCE Madoka's grandfather in chapter THREE and suddenly Madoka and Mitsuki are having sex in chapter FOUR and that's it? That's how everything ends? What the hell. Nothing was built up properly. There was no proper closure. It was all so rushed that I felt like someone pushed me off a cliff and let me plummet to my death. I couldn't even enjoy the sex scene because all I thought was ''Mitsuki, you dirty little asshole, you were all about that old dick just seconds ago. I'd say fuck you, but I bet you'd enjoy that too.'' CAN YOU TELL HOW PISSED OFF I AM? The only thing good about this story was the art. Could it have killed the Mangaka to draw a few more chapters to make Madoka and Mitsuki coming together a little more likable? And if she couldn't be bothered with more chapters, then don't let those two end up together? Or better yet, write out the whole mess with the grandfather and focus on Madoka and Mitsuki's relationship? Just a poorly executed manga.