Alice's manga / #Threesome(10)

I could happily read a whole series of this. Shame it's a one shot.

Ever read a story that had so much potential to be great, but just fell short? I feel this was one of them. There were threesomes, there was BDSM, there was smut, there was interesting side stories. But the characters just felt so flat. I felt they needed more emotion.

Threesomes? Smut? What more could you want?

If I could rate this 2 and a half stars, I would. The storie is kinda meh. I liked the art, minus the fact the Uke looked like a child. He was supposed to be the same age as the other two, but the way he was drawn just made it look almost pedo-ish. There was also a kipnap/rape/sexual assault scene that I almost dropped it for. It was unnecessary and the Uke forgave them far too easily. Not gonna lie, the seggs scenes were pretty hot, I liked the inclusion of vanilla and toy play, and the 3P scenes were just... But that's about all this had going for it. In short: Porn with a plot.

Turns out I love sandwiches and I'm totally going to hell for wanting more of that.

Love me some sandwiches. Damn.

I mean, Haru's character wasn't right, buuut.... damn if if I can say I didn't like seeing an... *ahem* seafood sandwich... I'd be lying!

I should delved deeper and have read the tags. "Brother's " wasn't what I wanted to see after reading that.

I liked this much more than I thought i would. At the beginning they appeared to be two awfully toxic guys out on the prowl to fulfill their carnal desires by having threesomes with different girls every night. And they treated the girls as a means to get off and not as people. But then as you keep reading, there's so much more to it and they're so much more complex as characters than I was expecting. They have deep rooted trauma from their childhoods, and sex is their escape. And then three became just two. There was an attraction between them they couldn't deny, and a compatibility that just made sex so good. I was under the impression this would just be porn with a plot, but it actually ended really sweet.

I'm not sure I liked this one. Hiroi comes across really manipulative and childish. He wants to share everything with his friend Take. Even when it comes to lovers. And I dont know, but it felt like Take and Mine just go along with their relationship, not because they want it, but because of Hiroi. Was kinda hoping because of the cover, that Take and Mine were endgame.... but apparently not.