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Juli's manga / #eh(1)

They are a Couple

Complete | Bu Er,Xinghai Dongman | 2000 released
2021-06-02 18:04 marked
Tags: Cute eh

It caught my eye at first but it seriously just feels like a rip off of Love Stage. It might not be but the story line makes me cringe and the snobby rich theme is killing me slowly. The art is decent but makes my eyes sore just because it doesn't look like it's meant to show off graceful movements or any sort of story. The art seems like some nice deviant art post of some kid in high school who's trying out a story line for the first time. I know I'm being harsh but I technically couldn't even finish reading the story. I got about 30 chapters in but nothing interesting seems to happen and the English text is hard to understand. The chapters are choppy and robotic. I think two stars is actually generous. I see potential and I see someone here actually tried, but it's just not working for me at all. Like the gastritis thing? That felt unbelievably short, it needed to go on longer especially if you want that urgency effect that makes the main character seem like they are genuinely worried about the sickness. When he was pushing himself there should have been more care to Ao and the fall should've been more dramatic and touchy. It literally ended in two seconds, what was the point of even putting it in? Just to show that Ao puts up a front?? We already knew that since the the beginning so the entire scene felt unnecessary and like the author was just putting in random garbage.